❌ Original Headline:

“Make beautiful websites regardless of your design experience.”

Why it doesn’t land:

• “Beautiful” is vague and subjective - it doesn’t speak to outcomes or user priorities

• It implies effort and risk, not ease or clarity

• There’s no urgency or credibility - nothing tells us this tool is truly production-grade

✅ Revised Headline:

“Launch production-ready UIs – even if you’re not a designer.”

Why it works:

• “Launch” is action-first - fast, decisive, and goal-oriented

• “Production-ready UIs” delivers clarity about what’s actually being offered

• “Even if you’re not a designer” builds trust, removes friction, and expands the audience

💬 Commentary:

This fix anchors the copy in what users want: speed, capability, and confidence. It shifts from aspirational fluff to a practical promise - the kind that increases conversions.

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